English is abused in so many ways: here's an advert just outside my apartment next to the bus stop - yes, where I catch the nunmber 5 every morning.
I'm a stickler for adverbs and using them correct - whoops I mean correctly.
How can eyes be effortless?
Were they just saving ink?
Anway, the comma is redundant whether her eyes are actually effortless or indeed, as I think was the intent, that they are beautiful without effort on her part..!
What a mess.
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